Week Two - Initial Meeting/Script Overview

After the group formation, we decided to arrange a date for our intial meeting to discuss ideas and any thoughts or concerns our new group members may have had. In the meantime, Carmen had slightly adjusted the original script she had to fit the new plot she had come up with. This had "Joe" questioning his sanity and place in the world as he hallucinated the television speaking to him and his charming neighbour, "Joanna", creating a relationship with him, only for it to be revealed in the final scene that she is not real.

During the meeting, we felt that it would suit our group's dynamic more to make Joe a female protagonist who was a struggling filmaker which would be the main antagoniser to her loss of grip on reality. We kept the relationship with Joanna but lessend her role in the film so that we could replace certain things such as her consoling Joe with Joe's own internal monologue to show her quickly falling apart.

From here we continued as a group to make smaller alterations to the general storyline and filler scenes to make the plot flow well once it was all put back together. Below I will post screemshots of the original script with our notes aside it.